No kidding... streamline it down to something like:
LEGO Star Wars II: The Empire Strikes Brick was announced today February 10, 2006. This new game will be released this fall on seven platforms: PlayStation, PSP, Xbox, GameCube, Nintendo DS, Game Boy Advance, and Windows. The game will be distributed by Eidos Interactive. For more information on LEGO Star Wars II: The Original Trilogy, please visit www.lucasarts.com.
And my god who wrote this crap?
release this fall across seven platforms. May the Force build with you on PlayStation®2 computer entertainment system, Sony PSP™, Xbox® video game system from Microsoft, Nintendo GameCube™, Nintendo DS™, Nintendo Game Boy Advance™ and Windows.
Who in the hell doesn't know that Xbox is a video game system from Microsoft? And is it necessary to append computer entertainment system to Playstation?! God I hate press releases... they have no soul!
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